RE: [provision] DU0001 PSP - PST Create Account

I offer the following comments on Use Case 1

 

1.    
I propose the following change to the description
line l-17

a.    
This use case describes a PSP requesting the
creation or addition of data (aka account(s) or data) on/to a PST.  A real
world example would be a PSP requesting the creation at a new mail account on
mail host PST.

2.    
We should remove the PST connection information (AuthN
out of scope) l-20

3.    
l-21 would be better phrased as “…the
set of attributes (or data) required by the PST to create a new instance of the
managed data set” or something…

4.    
I don’t understand l-22.  If this refers
to the PSTID then this could be supplied or generated both of which require
more definition

5.    
I don’t understand the pre-condition
“PSP has identity information of itself” l-34

6.    
Could you explain why the PSP binds to the PST
based on vID l-36

7.    
L-38 step 3 implied the PSP is requesting a
specific PSTID for the new request

8.    
I don’t understand l-39 step 4.  Is the
implication that my PSP requests a specific PSTID and the PST is notifying the
PST that the PSTID is “available” and thus therein
“reserved” for the then following creation?

9.    
It probably pays to add the following
pre-conditions

a.    
PSP has an established trust relationship with the
PST it wished to provision to

10.  On
l-44 again the issue of “account” rather than “data”

 

Darran
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Sent: Monday, March 25, 2002 11:24
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Subject: [provision] DU0001 PSP -
PST Create Account

 

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