RE: [provision] DU0001 PSP - PST Create Account

Without repeating Darran's, I'll just add mine to 
his.

 

1. I 
don't believe steps 1 and 2 on lines 36 and 37 are necessary. I don't believe 
the introduction of a VID in this communication is 
necessary.

 

2. I 
don't believe step 7 on ine 42 is necessary.

 

3. 
This steps indicate an asynchronous communication mechanism. Do we need to 
support a synchronous mechanism? 

 

4. We 
discussed the issue of partial completion of a request in the face-to-face. We 
should address that.

 

5. We 
also discussed the issue of the PST generating information, possibly even the 
PST ID,  and returning it as a result of the add request. We should address 
that also.

 

Tony

  
-----Original Message-----
From: Darran Rolls 
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Sent: Tuesday, April 02, 2002 4:53 
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To: 
Subject: RE: 
  [provision] DU0001 PSP - PST Create Account

  

  
I offer the following comments 
  on Use Case 1

  
 

  
1.     
  I propose the following change 
  to the description line l-17

  
a.     
  This use case describes a PSP 
  requesting the creation or addition of data (aka account(s) or data) on/to a 
  PST.  A real world example would be a PSP requesting the creation at a 
  new mail account on mail host PST.

  
2.     
  We should remove the PST 
  connection information (AuthN out of scope) l-20

  
3.     
  l-21 would be better phrased as 
  “…the set of attributes (or data) required by the PST to create a new instance 
  of the managed data set” or something…

  
4.     
  I don’t understand l-22.  
  If this refers to the PSTID then this could be supplied or generated both of 
  which require more definition

  
5.     
  I don’t understand the 
  pre-condition “PSP has identity information of itself” l-34

  
6.     
  Could you explain why the PSP 
  binds to the PST based on vID l-36

  
7.     
  L-38 step 3 implied the PSP is 
  requesting a specific PSTID for the new request

  
8.     
  I don’t understand l-39 step 
  4.  Is the implication that my PSP requests a specific PSTID and the PST 
  is notifying the PST that the PSTID is “available” and thus therein “reserved” 
  for the then following creation?

  
9.     
  It probably pays to add the 
  following pre-conditions

  
a.     
  PSP has an established trust 
  relationship with the PST it wished to provision to

  
10. 
   On l-44 again the issue of 
  “account” rather than “data”

  
 

  

  
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-----Original 
  Message-----
From: 
  Darran Rolls 
  
Sent: Monday, March 25, 2002 
  11:24 PM
To: 
  
Subject: [provision] DU0001 PSP - PST 
  Create Account

  
 

  
http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/provision/200203/msg00009.html

  
 

  
Darran 
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