1.05 proofreading pass

Take particular note of the changes in the following lines (numbered
from the change PDF) and strike them if you consider them incorrect or
excessive:

661-662
855-857
894-896
911-912
992-994
1020-1021
1243-1244
1318
1396-1397
1475-1481
1553-1558
1559-1565

  I can't see how any of the remaining changes do anything other than
correct punctuation, typos, grammar, style, or clarity; but likewise
strike any of the others if you don't approve.



Mark Peel
Web Services Infrastructure
Novell, Inc.