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section layout and reshuffle: uploaded draft
Title: section layout and reshuffle: uploaded draft A "contribution" document, "WS-Reliability-SectionChanges-2004-02-18.pdf" has been uploaded on the TC site (please download Rev 1), for review. This is an implementation of the proposed changes which I summarized in a previous mail earlier this week. The PDF shows the diffs with Feb 12 version. You can have an overview of the reshuffle by looking at the table of contents. A few additional editorial changes are proposed in addition to the "reshuffling": - Definitions of the 3 main RM agreement items in section 1.8.1, has been consolidated in respective "feature" sections. - A few simplifications in the 3.3 "Ordering" section, which had redundancies, and failure case made more explicit. - some rewording also in 3.1, 3.2, failure cases more explicit in 3.1. - Termination t4.2 (Receiver side) had a few lines that needed be removed: were not correct, or at best confusing. - Each termination case gets its introduction line named "context". - I had trouble numbering sections beyond Heading 2 with OpenOffice... so Heading 3 and beyond are not numbered so far. Jacques
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