RE: [tosca] Groups - draft-tosca-nfv-v1.0-wd04-rev05-ChangeMark.doc uploaded

Hello Shitao, et al,

 

Happy New Year!

 

Thank you for updating the latest draft.  There are editorial errors during your edits.

 

Editorial Errors: Multiple instance of

 

1)     
floarting => floating

2)     
l2_address_aData => l2_address_data

3)     
l3_address_aData => l3_address_data

4)     
pparent => parent

5)     
there are multiple instance of “side bar” comments from me, where these comments are no longer valid. Thus, its should be deleted now, such as “moved
 to section 3.1”, “moved from 6.11”

 

Finally, there are additional clean-up and tweaking of the Section 3 (NFV Architecture & Concept Overview). A separate contribution is needed for this task.

 

Regards,

Thinh

 

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l Editorial changes for Cpd and VnfVirtualLinkDesc based on document Issue_TOSCA307_ConnectionPoint_VL_change proposal-r2

l Clause 5.9.5.5, changed tosca.nodes.nfv.VL to tosca.nodes.nfv.VnfVirtualLinkDesc to align with IFA011.

l Deleted the legacy contents which are not aligned with IFA011:

• clause 5.1

• clause 5.9.1, the node type definition of VNF

• clause 5.9.2, the node type definition of VDU.

• examples of VNFD and NSD

• tosca.datatypes.compute.Container.Architecture.CPUAllocation

• tosca.datatypes.compute.Container.Architecture.NUMA

• tosca.capabilities.Compute.Container.Architecture

l Deleted NSD related content, v1.0 will only cover VNFD model.

l Removed ETSI GS NFV-MAN 001 v1.1.1 in the reference.

-- Mr. shitao li 

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