Thank you Sally. Here's my feedback:
(1) Line 3: "Technical Note" is right on top of title - recommend a
space between these
(2) Line 29: "Authors" should not be in TOC
(3) Line 34: There should not be text in the TOC
(4) Line 40: Same as #3
(5) Line 52: Does not belong in TOC
(6) General: There are no figure #'s in the document. We should please
add these.
(7) Line 567: There is a "stray item" at the end - it appears to be a
Word table. We should please remove this.
Thanks,
Joe
"Fuger, Sally" wrote:
>
> Okay, I still haven't got this right. Let's try again. This is the version to use for your comments.
>
> Sally
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Fuger, Sally
> Sent: Thursday, April 03, 2003 5:08 PM
> To: Breininger, Kathryn R; Chiusano Joseph; ; ebXML
> Regrep (E-mail)
> Subject: [regrep] Technical Note: Registering Web Services in an ebXML
> Registry
>
> I forgot to add the line numbers to the version I sent out a few minutes ago. If you received it, please discard it. Attached is the updated version of Joe's Technical Note (nee Best Practices document) for everyone's review.
>
> Sally
>
> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
> Name: 2_OASIS-Registry TC - Registering Web Services in an ebXML Registry.doc
> Type: Microsoft Word Document (application/msword)
> 2_OASIS-Registry TC - Registering Web Services in an ebXML Registry.doc Encoding: base64
> Description: 2_OASIS-Registry TC - Registering Web Services in an ebXML Registry.doc
> Download Status: Not downloaded with message
