Issues in the specification draft

Gary,

 

Here are some remarks concerning the
specification document version I got. I’d appreciate if you could please go
over them and verify that the text should be revised.

 

Please call me if you have any questions.

 

- Rami

 

 

 

  
  
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I believe that in the ListTargets example he
  target ID is incorrect.

  
 

 

  
  
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I believe that in the example:

  
 

  
<deleteResponse
  status=“pending" asyncRequestID=”8488”/> 

  
 

  
- should be instead –

  
 

  
<deleteResponse
  status=“pending" RequestID=”8488”/>

  
 

 

  
  
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In the example: 

  
 

  
<component>/Person/email]</component>
  does not have an opening square bracket

  
 

 

  
  
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I believe that the example:

  
 

  
<capabilityData>

  
                        <reference typeOfReference="owns" />
  

  
                                <toPsoId
  ID="1431" targetId=”target1”/>

  
</capabilityData>

  
 

  
- should be instead -

  
 

  
<capabilityData>

  
                        <reference typeOfReference="owns"> 

  
                                <toPsoId
  ID="1431" targetId=”target1”/>

  
</reference>

  
</capabilityData>

  
 

 

  
  
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I believe that the example:

  
 

  
<modifyRequest>

  
        <psoId
  ID=”1431” targetId=”target1”/>

  
        <modification
  modificationMode=”delete”>

  
                <capabilityData>

  
                        <reference
  typeOfReference="owner" /> 

  
                </capabilityData>

  
        </modification>

  
        <modification
  modificationMode=”add”>

  
                <capabilityData>

  
                        <reference typeOfReference="owner"/ >
  

  
                                <toPsoId
  ID="2245" targetId=”target2”/>

  
                </capabilityData>

  
        </modification>

  
</modifyRequest>

  
 

  
- should be instead -

  
 

  
<modifyRequest>

  
        <psoId
  ID=”1431” targetId=”target1”/>

  
        <modification
  modificationMode=”delete”>

  
                <capabilityData>

  
                        <reference
  typeOfReference="owner" /> 

  
                </capabilityData>

  
        </modification>

  
        <modification
  modificationMode=”add”>

  
                <capabilityData>

  
                        <reference typeOfReference="owner" >
  

  
                                <toPsoId
  ID="2245" targetId=”target2”/>

  
</reference>

  
                </capabilityData>

  
        </modification>

  
</modifyRequest>

  
 

 

  
  
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The
  target ID in the example is believed to be incorrect

  
 

 

  
  
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In
  the StatusResponse example the PSO is missing the Data tag

  
 

 

  
  
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Was
  ‘batch of batches’ removed? When?

  
 

 

  
  
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The
  ID in example 3.5.4.1.3 should probably be basePSOID

  
 

 

  
  
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71

  
  
  
There
  is an example for bulkModifyResponse
  – but there is no corresponding verb in the document

  
 

 

  
  
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71

  
  
  
There
  is an example for bulkDeleteResponse
  – but there is no corresponding verb in the document

  
 

 

  
  
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76

  
  
  
A
  missing closing currentPassword
  tag in the top example

  
 

 

  
  
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In section 3.5.5.3.3: I
  believe that the following text:

  
                                             

  
“The
  provider returns an <spmlResponse>
  element. The “status” attribute of the <spmlResponse>
  element indicates that the provider successfully resetd the password.”

  
 

  
- Should be instead -         

  
 

  
The
  provider returns an <resetPasswordResponse>
  element. The “status” attribute of the element indicates that the
  provider successfully reset the password.

  
 

 

  
  
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The
  target ID in the example is believed to be incorrect

  
 

 

  
  
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In
  section 3.5.7.2.3: I believe that there
  is an error with the basePSOID