1.1 Introduction

Greetings,

A couple of comments on 1.1 Introduction in version 17 of the draft:

1.1 Introduction

first paragraph, second sentence reads:

The schema is suitable for office documents, including text documents,
spreadsheets, charts and graphical documents like drawings or
presentations, but is not restricted to these *kind* of documents.

Error: number agreement

Suggest:

... but is not restricted to these kinds of documents.


second paragraph reads:

The schema retains high-level information suitable for editing
document and is friendly to transformations using XSLT or similar
XML-based languages or tools.

Comment: 'The schema retains'?, seems awkward, along with 'suitable
for editing document', which is true but it also supports creation of
documents as well. Note number error with 'document.'

Suggest:

The schema defines suitable XML structures for office documents and is
friendly to transformations using XSLT or similar XML-based tools.

Hope everyone is having a great day!

Patrick

-- 
Patrick Durusau
Director of Research and Development
Society of Biblical Literature

Chair, V1 - Text Processing: Office and Publishing Systems Interface
Co-Editor, ISO 13250, Topic Maps -- Reference Model

Topic Maps: Human, not artificial, intelligence at work!