RE: [ebsoa] Groups - DiscussionDraft-VisionStatement (VisionStatement.ebSOA_DiscussionDraft.doc) uploaded

Folks,

 

Attached edited version - I did more changes et al -
plus re-organization.

 

Eventually I believe we need three documents - this one seems to be
merging all three into one! ; -)

 

The good news is - what I see is very good - I'd venture to say the
best we have ever had.

 

Sometimes though we veer off into telling people motherhood and apple
pie stuff - so I've deleted what I saw as falling into that
category.  Less is more always!!

 

The three eventual products that I see we need are:

 

1) Revised Charter - short succinct - two pager.

 

2) Executive Summary / Outreach / Press Release type material
explaining applicablity of Charter to the real world

3) Approach
and Roadmap to guide our own internal work products

 

I think we can easily derive these from the document - and I've
attempted to re-organize it a bit to make this a bit clearer. 

 

Talk with everyone at 3pm (caveat - I'll be driving around school
parking lots collecting children)

 

Thanks, DW

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Sally,

I have few comments that are included in the attached file.

Regards,

Goran

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