Guidance about natural language short descriptions

Attached is a topic that shows my thought processes as I reworked the short descriptions for the programming domain.

Best,
Kris

Kristen James Eberlein
Chair, OASIS DITA Technical Committee
Owner, Eberlein Consulting LLC

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