Review of issue #29 - bookmap stage 3

Nancy, many thanks for your review. I've implemented all your
      suggestions.

    
TC members, I'd really like to get this on the agenda for next
      week's TC meeting. Do any other reviewers want to step forward, in
      the event that Eliot Kimber and Eric Sirois cannot complete a
      review this week?

    
Updated PDF attached, and corresponding source in SVN is
      up-to-date.

    
I'll accept review comments in any way that TC members want to
      offer them!

    

    
Best,

      Kris

      

      Kristen James Eberlein

      Chair, OASIS DITA Technical Committee

      Principal consultant, Eberlein Consulting

      www.eberleinconsulting.com

      +1 919 622-1501; kriseberlein (skype)

      

    

    

      

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            Subject:
            
            review of issue #29 - bookmap stage 3
          

          

            Date: 
            Tue, 26 Nov 2019 15:30:29 -0800
          

          

            From: 
            Nancy Harrison
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            To: 
            Kristen James Eberlein
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Hi Kris,

        

        

        
Here's my commented version of the latest bookmap
          proposal. I found only a couple of nits and one sentence that
          needed a bit more explication. AS far as I can tell, the code
          changes to the grammar files are all correct.

        

        

        
Glad that this is finally being implemented; it's been
          needed for a long time, and goes a ways toward making bookmap
          more usable.

        

        

        
Nancy

        

        

        

          

            
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              Nancy Harrison

              Infobridge Solutions 

              

          

        

      

    

  

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