Re: Updated ZIP of two PDFs for you to look at

Just a few things - very close... 

A number of the links (e.g. This version) are italicized. Make them plain. 

Latest version links are http://docs.oasis-open.org/dita/dita/v1.3/dita-v1.3-csd01-part0-overview.xxx. The csd01 needs to be removed so that the links are http://docs.oasis-open.org/dita/dita/v1.3/dita-v1.3-part0-overview.xxx. That also has to change in the citation block. 

The TC link needs to be to https://www.oasis-open.org/committees/dita/

The '2005' should be removed from the copyright statement in the footnote 

In PDF, the footer should appear on the first page 

In Part 1, the footer still has WD- at the start of the filename 

On Wed, Jun 24, 2015 at 10:43 AM, Kristen James Eberlein <> wrote:
Please ignore my earlier e-mail, and look at the PDF files in the attached ZIP.

Have I incorporated your feedback correctly?

Many thanks.

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Best,

Kris

Kristen James Eberlein

Chair, OASIS DITA Technical Committee

Principal consultant, Eberlein Consulting

www.eberleinconsulting.com

+1 919 682-2290; kriseberlein (skype)

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